tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post279240822959253167..comments2023-10-13T05:33:16.199-05:00Comments on Texas 2 Tennessee: IntuitionFinding the Happyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12974564782664702279noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-2344684012056445682009-07-14T17:44:42.327-05:002009-07-14T17:44:42.327-05:00I really like this notion of this "little man...I really like this notion of this "little man" as the embodiment of desire - -well done.Nathanhttp://disorder1313.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-39666012214455230832009-07-13T22:02:20.883-05:002009-07-13T22:02:20.883-05:00I was almost afraid to see what you had been cooki...I was almost afraid to see what you had been cooking...<br /><br />but I'm glad I peeked. I really enjoy the tension builds and then you "let the air out." Nice.angiehttp://therer2doors.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-87214109059102744032009-07-13T07:39:37.274-05:002009-07-13T07:39:37.274-05:00I agree with Dana -- I got a similar feel on this ...I agree with Dana -- I got a similar feel on this poem as well. Nicely done.<br /><br />-Nicole<br /><br /><a href="http://ravenswingpoetry.com/2009/07/10/mutiny-in-six-parts/" rel="nofollow">Mutiny in Six Parts</a>Raven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-14582967660118672852009-07-11T19:38:11.127-05:002009-07-11T19:38:11.127-05:00nicely "cooked"...nicely "cooked"...Wayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-17205980214098201312009-07-11T12:00:09.624-05:002009-07-11T12:00:09.624-05:00Wonderful! I love your take on this.Wonderful! I love your take on this.Erin Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03428693832930474044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-19414452373965339132009-07-09T23:32:40.820-05:002009-07-09T23:32:40.820-05:00Like this one....Like this one....Jeeveshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02059095696768768954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-78430964327124208602009-07-09T20:27:15.743-05:002009-07-09T20:27:15.743-05:00Your little man is almost like a parasitic twin, s...Your little man is almost like a parasitic twin, something that is part of a person but can never survive on its own.Danahttp://mygorgeoussomewhere.org/category/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-67323131082116078962009-07-09T19:29:49.548-05:002009-07-09T19:29:49.548-05:00Thanks everyone.
Homunculus was not in my vocab...Thanks everyone. <br /><br />Homunculus was not in my vocabulary until this prompt came across cyberspace. It was a good exercise.Finding the Happyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12974564782664702279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-9823517940102407262009-07-09T14:52:39.230-05:002009-07-09T14:52:39.230-05:00Intriguing. I like the idea of the little man clam...Intriguing. I like the idea of the little man clamoring for a look, a touch.Debhttp://stoneymoss.org/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-51962616145818425532009-07-09T11:22:02.018-05:002009-07-09T11:22:02.018-05:00I like how you did it!
abstractingI like how you did it!<br /><br /><a href="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2009/07/abstracting.html" rel="nofollow">abstracting</a>gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14160454.post-89756073833357535492009-07-09T10:19:43.815-05:002009-07-09T10:19:43.815-05:00You took a similar road, yet divergent path to my ...You took a similar road, yet divergent path to my thoughts...<br /><br />I like the imagery and feeling of this...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com